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Hey look an original art piece by me.
I have requested critiques, here is some known problems. human is fucked up proportionally. shading may be off the hand is not that of human and other various things. so yha, I'm working on that. please do not keep the critiques simple by gods if you can help me please help me how ever you can. Comments
 I really like these pieces that appear to tell a story. I can see a real good story behind this one, and the character designs are good too!
There definitely IS a story behind this, I know it... -- "Do I look like I have a plan? The mob has plans. The cops have plans. You know what I am, Harvey? I'm a dog chasing cars. I don't know what I'm going to do once I've caught one." - The Joker, "The Dark Knight"  I thought this day would never come
 Well i agree about the first comment, This piece really tells a story that anyone could really create.  -- Icon made by *neifaren <--- Please visit her   That's cute. ^^ I think they both seem comfy, too.
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Critiques
Now for the critique:
You say the proportion of the human is wrong and you may be right, but I'm also not sure on the wings to body length ratio.
Your colouring is good, but I am unsure as to where the light is originating from.
Shades and shadows are slightly out of kilter, but it's hardly noticeable.
As an overall piece I don't have much to complain aboot.
It is still a very relaxing piece, not just to draw but to look at and study aswell.
Well done matey
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